Gentlest of Surrenders

This is the gentlest of surrenders.


With this surrender, you do not “rage against the dying of the light”.1


With this surrender, you cautiously explore your most tender hollows.

Your thoughts, like tendrils, caress their borders.

And then – softly, gently – together, you descend hand-in-hand

to the silent pool.

Still clasping your hand,

Tenderness dips her distal toe into the waiting depths.


Now, tenderness takes the lead.

She guides you into the still waters,

Where now . . . fully immersed . . .


You can finally breathe.


 1 Dylan Thomas. Do Not Go Gentle into that Good Night.

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